posted this uiabird.deviantart.com/art/Pro…
and asked for help so here's me attempting to help XD
I was told I suck at explaining so I'm going to try to be more detailed OTL
-Great job with the arm and making the elbow match with the end of the rib cage and the wrist with the crotch!
The bottom of the rib cage doesn't connect directly like that in the midsection, it looks more like the sketch I drew next to your original.
-Don't forget to draw the bottom of the jaw!
Even if you're just sketching, drawing the jaw can keep the neck from looking too long and help everything stay in proportion.
-Make sure to draw through your shapes which, in this case, is the rib cage. It's just a way to make sure it curves out far enough on its own before adding breasts.
-Remember to keep the muscles in the legs! Instead of thinking of the legs as just ovals connected to the torso try to think of them as well legs XD They have thighs and calves so don't forget about them! D: The thighs don't connect to the butt so drastically because of the connecting tissues and muscles in between them (You might get an indent where they connect but nothing like a complete stop unless you're J Lo
-Feet have ankles!
They look kinda like rounded obtuse triangles from the side as you can kinda see from mine XD
It looks great, keep up the amazing work, and I can't wait to see more of your art!
Disclaimer! If you don't like the things I changed/don't agree with what I said/whatever I'm very sorry and please just don't refer to this for help XD I am still learning and have a long way to go